CEP 800 Reflection
The lesson that I taught was one of the few culminating activities to my fifth grade Mystery unit. Students were expected to take what they have learned about mysteries, over the past few weeks, to create their own mystery. The main things that were learned were as follows:
- What are the elements of a mystery?
- What is a blog?
- What is peer editing and how is it done appropriately?
Students were to then take the learned information and write their own mystery (using our classroom blog) that incorporates all of the required mystery elements. The underlying assumptions in regards to this lesson were that my students could take everything they learned and apply it to a well formatted mystery. I hoped also to also instill in my students that writing can go beyond just using a pencil and paper and hopefully that creates more excitement in my classroom to write.
The affordances for how the information was represented were that the vast majority of the material that was presented was information that my students had already learned. This should help my students in preparing to write their mystery story. The main constraint that my students faced was actually learning how to post writing assignments and comments to a blog. This is new information that was to be learned and one class period just wasn’t enough time to allow for my students to experiment with blogging and to get use to this new method of writing.
During my lesson taught learning took place in many forms. Most was through the constructivist approach in which students were to take the information that they already acquired to create their mystery story. Even when I introduced blogging to my students, most of them had no idea what a blog was, but they knew how to instant message and email so the concept really came easy to them as they based it on things that they already knew.
Behaviorism came into play with the fact that my students were required to include each element of a mystery into their stories. Students were required to know and describe each one of the elements and were even tested on the elements in the past. To make their mystery complete, each element would have to be obviously stated in their mystery story.
Social Constructivism theory is clearly evident in my lesson through my student’s requirement to respond to their peer’s mysteries. This is where the lesson got fun! Once my students have posted their mysteries to the classroom blog, students were then required to read through their classmate’s stories and try to solve one another’s mystery. The were then asked to post what they thought to be the solution of each mystery read on our classroom blog using what they have learned about mystery elements. They may ask questions and formulate their responses based on one another’s comments.
The main reason I created this lesson was to meet the needs of the various learning styles in my classroom. Many of my students struggle with expressing their thoughts and words onto paper, however almost every student loves being on the computer. What a better way to increase a students desire to write than to use a computer and the internet. This lesson was not something that was completely new. Most of the content had been presented over the past few weeks. This lesson was more of a culminating lesson and activity with an integration of technology.
In order for my lesson to be a success, teachers need to know what is expected of them through Michigan’s Language Arts curriculum standards. Teachers and learners both need to understand the basics of what makes up a mystery, how to peer edit, and they need to understand each step of the writing process. The biggest demand that’s placed on teachers is the assumption that all students know how to access and navigate the internet. This could become a struggle and make the lesson a bit more challenging.
During this lesson, students were assessed on three things: Their blog posting, the writing process, and their responses to at least three of their classmate’s posted mysteries.
With regards to their blog posting, the main things that I was looking for were all of the elements of a mystery included in their story and each student’s use of the writing process. Students were given a rubric to follow which is the same rubric that I used to assess my students work.
Technology was implemented in this lesson and is used as a writing and communication tool. The advantages that technology holds for this role is that it really motivated my students to write and respond to their classmates postings. The disadvantages were that there were not any editing tools for my students to use and that it was more time consuming for me to actually monitor what my students post, comment on, and respond to on the classroom blog. The unique contribution that the technology makes in facilitating learning is that it exposes my students to yet another way to voice and present their thoughts rather than just using a pencil and paper.
I expected my students to become more motivated to write with the use of blogging in this lesson. My students were so excited to experiment with our classroom blog once I introduced it to them. The biggest downfall was that I had to give my students some extra time to “play” with the blog prior to giving them their assignment, but it was nice to see their enthusiasm. The main questions that students asked were on how to edit their papers using the blog. I encouraged them to type their mysteries out using Word first, edit their stories in Word, and then copy and past their mystery into the blog.
My students could really relate to the use of blogging. Once I showed them what a blog was, they instantly related blogging to instant messaging and emailing and caught on very quickly.
I was overjoyed with my student’s excitement to write using a blog and I loved how they were also eager to try to solve their classmate’s mysteries.
In regards to the content that was taught, my students were so eager to start writing that they didn’t focus as much on making sure that the elements of a mystery were incorporated into their stories. I did read through many of the posted stories and was happy to discover that many students did actually include most of the elements of a mystery in their stories, but without any awareness of doing so.
I do think my students made good sense of the presented content, but being as the concept of blogging was new to them, they were so excited about using it, they didn’t focus on the required content of writing a mystery as much as I would have like them to.

